drawing writing
高级句型
| 句型 | 介绍 | 示例 |
|---|---|---|
| 状语从句 | 对句子补充，能补充任意信息如时间条件对象 | he dead at the beginning of 13th century.he dead before 13th century |
| 定语从句 | 主语是从句的宾语或主语 | a man who looks aged.the building we mention yestarday is the place we meet. |
| 表语从句 | ||
| 伴随状语 | 伴随状语和定语从句的逗号无严格限制 | a boy is young,gaming with friends |
| 同谓语从句 | 从句是一个完整句子对主语补充,和定语从句界限不明显，无需过度解读 | a city that it has many wonders/remarkable spectacles is popular |
| 嵌套从句 | 从句可以嵌套 | the phone that the man who is aged brought is cost effective(定语+定语) |
| 强调句 | it is that…将任何句子中强调部分放入is后面即可 | It is amazing that an aged man who looks plays with his child. |
| 倒装句 | only … can | |
| 插入语 | 作文不建议，降低句子逻辑程度 |
高级替换
| 词汇替换 | 不能出现前面任何词汇 |
|---|---|
| now | currently |
| strange | weird |
| important | significant,emphatic,critical,vital,essential |
| people | individual,resident,citizen |
| very | extremely |
| different | various,varient |
| show | reveal,suggest,depict,indicate |
| in my opinion | to my understanding据我所知 |
| think | deem |
| enverionment | scene,scenario |
| actually | admittedly |
| some | several |
| 句型替换 | |
|---|---|
| for only one week | the preiod is limited to one week |
| more and more | an increasing number of,increasingly better |
| lots of people | A considerable number of people |
| a lot of | a host of |
| for example | a case in point |
基础写作框架
1-3第一段，4-6第二段，7-9第三段
描图
A man/the drawing/there is…加文字
the caption read/the man in the drawing says…作者含义
The author’s purpose extends beyond the picture itself, focusing on what lies beneath the surface of the drawing.实际意义
Acutally, the purpose of drawing is to show us that…换句话说
In other words,Put simply, the primary cause of this phenomenon is people’s disregard for rules in the corresponding environmentaccording to latest survey conducted by goverment,approximately all citizens exhibit this undesirable habit.
反问
So how can we do to avoid being irrational?个人观点
In my opinion, taking all aspects of this phenomenon into account, we should adhere to our original intention.某一方面
in term of environment, we should proactively contribute our own efforts.结尾升华
Only by doing so can we unlock the true potential of renewable energy and pave the way for a sustainable future.
Not until we have taken active measures to do so shall we secure for ourselves a prosperous and promising future
Only through the diligent pursuit of such endeavors can we truly pave the path towards a luminous and auspicious future.
- 2015
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6there are four friends get together to have a dinner.what's weird is that the four appear to stranger to each other,not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.
the phenomenon reflected in the picture is not rare nowadays,as we always read news that face-to-face communication which was taken for granted has been violently ruined by smart phones and become a luxury.
reasons that why this kind of phenomenon occers from time to time are various.one of the possible causes is rapid development of electric communication and internet.it is also owing to the fact of the change in social atmosphere.
in any case,however,the smart phone could never be the excuse for indulging in it.hence one should start to avoid being addited to the entertainment of smart phones to prevent this scence from occurring. additionally, efforts of individuals should be supplemented by communicating with their friends and faimilies more,for example,go out on vacation,climbing,hiking with friends is better than stay at home,which would be of great signigicance to return to normal.
石雷鹏写作框架（高级）
1-2第一段
3-5第二段
6第三段
描图
these drawings.in the left one,there is …in the right one,…描字
finally,several chinese characters can be noticed below the picture,which say that…现象描述
to my understanding,can be likened to …双面阐述
on the one hand, a case in point is the scene in the left picture.however,on the other hand,… a typical example is the scenario in the right.提出担忧
admittedly,an increasing number of youngsters…this phenomenon is partically worth attention.个人总结
石雷鹏预测作文一：科技双刃剑
these two drawings are simple but satirical.in the left one,there is a girl,setting in front of a computer and typing so many words with no difficulty.however,in the right one,without the help of modern technology, the girl has great trouble in writing words on paper,with the throught in her mind:i need to look them up on my cell phone.finally,several chinese characters can be noticed below the picture,which say that science and technology has changed people’s habits.
the fast development of science and technology,to my understanding,can be likened to a double-edged wsword.on the one hand,a host of innovative technological products can bring us greate convenience,help us save time and enhance our working efficiency.a case in point is the scene in the left picture.on the other hand,it is modern technology that cause some young people to lose certain basic skills in life,work and study.a typical example is the scenario in the right.admittedly, an increasing number of youngsters ,now, forget how to write some common words that they learned in elementary school.this phenomenon is partically worth attention.
as a youngster,i deem that it is advisible for us to utilize smart technological products in rational manner,including the computers,cell phones and the like.
- 2016